In Year 12, I took part in LSE Springboard, where I received personalised feedback on my personal statement from an LSE admissions tutor — someone who reads and admits students. LSE cares more about the personal statement than any other university, so getting this insight really shaped my approach.

I spent countless hours on my personal statement (probs too many) but I learnt a lot. Hopefully this guide helps you avoid the mistakes I made, and write something sharp, original, and focused.

(Note: This advice is best suited for humanities and social sciences applicants.)

Best of luck :)

The Personal Statement which helped me get into Cambridge

Writing the Core Questions

Question 1 — Why do you want to study this subject or course?

Aim: Start with a hook that introduces your theme and interest.

• Begin with a genuine and personal opening line

  Example: “I am frustrated with the governance of Britain.”

• Introduce your area of interest and why it matters

• Give your unique, independent opinions on key debates/issues

• Show your desire to understand the subject in depth

Question 2 — How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

Aim: Showcase the depth of your independent engagement with the subject through supercurriculars

PLEASE DO NOT mention your A-Levels!!!!!

Each Paragraph Should:

• Begin with a clear theme
• Pose an argument or question